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Sonntag, 1. März 2015, 14:38

JN99 Music

Here is my first track I have ever released, I made it only with Sytrus and some FL Studio samples. It's a Trance track and i called it "Flight At Midnight". I know that it sounds amateurish, I really couldn't do it better because I don't have better VSTs, but I'm looking forward to buy some in future. My new name will be "JN99", I couldn't think of a better name, this name has sth to do with my real name.

So, here it is:Flight At Midnight
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Sonntag, 1. März 2015, 14:53

Good job, keep practicing and improving your skills.
This is actually an enjoyable track, so keep up the good work. :thumbsup:
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Sonntag, 1. März 2015, 15:00

Oh really, thank you so much :thumbup:
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Montag, 9. März 2015, 20:36

Here is my promised Jumpstyle track: Whistled Jump
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Dienstag, 17. März 2015, 18:14

Finally I bought Sylenth1 and I must say that it's a very great VST.

So, here is my experiment with it, it's a trance-track again:

Massive Storm (Original Mix)
Massive Storm (Radio Edit)
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Mittwoch, 29. April 2015, 18:01

Here is my new Hard Trance track: Explosion (Original Extended Mix)

I hope you like it and you can also tell what I can do better.
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Freitag, 8. Mai 2015, 20:53

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Freitag, 8. Mai 2015, 21:53

1. imo use a different bassdrum, one that is not distorted, I don't think it really fits in a trance track.

2. there is too much compression overall and especially in the high frequencies, you can hear compression artifacts

3. use more hihats and make the hihat patterns more interesting

4. that snare at 4:20 sounds muffled

5. in some parts of the song the mid frequencies are soooo quiet...

6. I couldn't really tell what is the main theme of the song and what is just a verse... ?(

7. I think this song is too long
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Freitag, 8. Mai 2015, 23:45

Yes, you may be right with the bassdrum an the compression. I will try to rework it a bit and see what I can do. But, anyway, great that you reviewed my track.

EDIT: The track has no real main theme, but in the Extendet version its introABCACoutro. The Club Mix is just a different edit.
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Samstag, 9. Mai 2015, 14:06

1. fixed
2. fixed
3. coldn't tink of any other
4. fixed
5. don't how to fix this
6. the big synth melody is the main theme
7. lenght will be the same
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Montag, 11. Dezember 2017, 16:22

So, finally after some time here is a new track again. The style is a mix of Happy Hardcore and Hard Trance. It might sound a bit like I just mixed many 90s sounds together, but this is of course just an experiment. It would be nice to see some reviews, you can be critical of course because I also want to improve my skills.

https://soundcloud.com/jn99-1/id-happy-hardcore
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